Haiku Friday::One Deep Breath

My submission for One Deep Breath
Promt: Loneliness

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Sitting in darkness
Without a sound to be heard
A single tear falls

Thank you to Patios for posting the link on her blog!

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For Davey:

Bubbles in the bath
We giggled as we got clean
Mama and baby

———

For Mikey:

Wells’ War of the Worlds
Words and pages grip you tight
“One more came to earth!”

———

For Maureen:

I want you to know
That no matter where you go
We’re eternal friends

———

For New Bloggers:

Don’t have any fear
Just write, be real , and sincere
Blogging is soul food

———

For Pauline:

Family and friend
An ear and shoulder for you
Always I will have

———
For Liv & Ben:

Imaginations
Yours both sky-rocket and soar
Making me smile deep

———

For Michael:

I wait patiently
For your return, touch, and kiss
My heart misses you

 

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15 Responses to “Haiku Friday::One Deep Breath”
  1. 11.09.2007

    Every one of these is so great!

  2. 11.09.2007

    What a wonderful post. Bathing with baby is always a slippery treat!

  3. 11.09.2007

    Love your messages to everyone! Davey’s is my favorite! It reminds me of baths with my little giggly one.

  4. 11.09.2007

    I love that you did haiku for specific people. Very cool!

  5. I loved all of them. And, I hope Daddy dearest returns soon for your sake. You need a breather!

  6. 11.09.2007

    Your loneliness one is fabulous. Your individualized ones are great. I love Davey’s in particular.

  7. 11.09.2007

    I love each and every one!

  8. 11.09.2007

    these are awesome. i love that you wrote to each person like that.

  9. 11.09.2007

    Those are awesome, as usual. You are a good poet!

  10. 11.09.2007

    These are awesome.
    I love them.

  11. 11.09.2007

    So many haikus
    you are a poet at heart
    I so love Fridays.

  12. 11.09.2007

    I love them all; especially the one to Michael.

    GREAT work this week!

  13. 11.09.2007

    Wow, you are so talented with these. Seriously, each one is AWESOME.

  14. 11.09.2007

    great Haiku’s! sweet and funny! :)

  15. Pauline
    11.11.2007

    Thanks for the haiku babe- XOXOXOXO


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