Haiku Friday: Kid Edition
This week I bring you
Haiku written by my kids:
They are really good!
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Haiku:
by Mikey
(almost 10)
The Leaves
The leaves are so green
Nice and pretty; then swiftly
Fall takes them away
Haiku
by Olivia
(almost 9)
Outdoor Wonders
The air smells so fresh
The grass wiggles in the wind
And birds chirp all day
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The Jungle
The elephant stomps
The king of the jungle roars
The zoo’s a wild place!
Haiku
by Benny
(age 7)
Two People
I love my Mama
I love her so very much
She takes care of us
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I love my Papa
He makes me laugh all the time
He’s the very best
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They are going to be awesome writers just like their momma! I love the one by Mikey and the two about mama and papa are too sweet. :)
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your children are very talented and sweet Mishi
They are good .I love these Haiku.
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I was wondering if you were teaching them to write haikus!
Nice job kids!
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wonder if i could teach my kids to write haikus? those are very good!
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What great poets you have! Lovely ‘ku’s all of them!
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Are you kidding me? Those are amazing! I see writing runs in the family! Wow!
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I see talent runs in the family!
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Those are FANTASTIC!
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Yay! Your kids are awesome.
Happy Friday, Mishi!
Danielle
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Aw, cute, and like you said, they are actually even good! I was a little disappointed that Davey didn’t write one – just kidding ;)
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Tell your sweet kids that another momma loves their Haiku-writing skilz. :)
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Hey, they are good! Have a nice weekend, Mishi. *Kisses*
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I LOVE that you had the kiddos do haiku! Really! That’s a great idea and they did a great job!
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those are so good!!
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Wow! These are wonderful … thanks for sharing.
Hugs and blessings,
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And those are the best ones of the week!
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Wow, very impressive! Can I contract them out to write mine next week? :)
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Those are the best haikus I’ve read all day!
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Very talented, creative kids! Awesome!
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Great haikus gang! Keep up the great writing and share more with us.
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Your kids really suck (for making me cry). Benny’s was sooo touching especially.
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Great ‘kus!
I like Benny’s the best…very sweet.
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Mishi!! They have inherited your eloquence. I love how Benny put you first. Awww. And, Liv’s elephant one is simply adorable.
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Exquisite writing, my dear.
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Great haikus!
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whoa – those are awesome haikus!!
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So beautiful. That is awesome.
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