100 Words: Hidden

Underneath all the years,
The poor choices,
Constant procrastination,
She waits.

The skinny, fit girl,
Who’s often felt but rarely seen,
Waiting to emerge again,
Hopefully.

Blaming her pregnancies,
Was an easy way to deny,
That the damage that has been done,
Is of her own doing.

Her body is getting older,
It’s getting harder to face the facts,
Though one thing’s for certain,
No more carelessness.

She owes it to herself,
To be the best she can be,
Inside and out,
Every breath she takes.

No more will she be hidden.
Come out,
Come out,
Where ever you are.

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100 Words
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Velvet Verbosity

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7 Responses to “100 Words: Hidden”
  1. 04.03.2008

    “Underneath all the years,
    The poor choices,
    Constant procrastination,
    She waits.”

    Different issues, but oh I can relate..

  2. 04.03.2008

    Just wow. Can I say that was deep without it sounding all cheesy but instead deep, as in, sincerely? If not, please settle for just wow ;)

  3. 04.03.2008

    Mishelle, I wish you well in this difficult, worthwhile endeavor. You’ve got a goal, and you’re working towards it. That’s a great beginning. :)

  4. 04.03.2008

    Mishi, Applies to us old, fat guys, as well. Love it.

  5. 04.03.2008

    Did you write this for me sweets, because it fits.
    Beautiful. I will be posting my 100 Words later today, keep an eye out for it.

  6. 04.04.2008

    Yes. Yes. And Yes. Stepping away from the cupcakes now. Seriously, I’m there with you.

  7. 04.07.2008

    Amazing. Just like you.


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